I wrote a review of the Source Code screenplay, a little while ago. I’m curious as to what you thought of the film. Did it live up to the hype? Did Duncan Jones do the script justice? What were some of the differences you found between the script and the movie? Was it better… or worse? Spoilers allowed.
by Chris Sparling
Paul is a U.S. contractor working in Iraq. After an attack by a group of Iraqis he wakes to find he is buried alive inside a coffin. With only a lighter and a cell phone it’s a race against time to escape this claustrophobic death trap.
This entire story takes place in a coffin. From start to finish with no flashbacks or anything. With that said, this script is awesome!
- Being only 79 pages this script is short and fast paced.
- This script is exciting and entertaining! Once I started reading I was sucked in and didn’t stop turning pages until the end.
- There is one part in the script where I almost had to stop reading. It made me squirm and I loved every minute of it.
- The ending was awesome!
- This movie is really unique and proves that locations do not matter if you can tell a good story.
- Paul is running out of oxygen in the coffin. Then he lights a candle. Fire burns O2. This bothered me.
- The script was great, but I’m not sure if an audience is going to be able to watch a dark coffin for an hour and a half.
This script is amazing, short, exciting, unique, entertaining, and the movie will star Ryan Reynolds. One thing I learned from this script is that story is really the only thing that matters. This whole script takes place in a coffin. One actor. One location. If anything, this script is a perfect exercise on relying on story alone. Why don’t you try and write an engaging script with one location. You think you can do it?
(UPDATE: Apparently the script over at script shadow was taken down. Sorry folks.)
Written by: Elan Mastai
Based on the Play “Thoothpaste and Cigars” by T.J. Dawe and Michael Rinaldi.
Draft Dated: November 28, 2007.
So last night I went to my pile of unread scripts and picked out The F-Word. This movie is basically an R-rated semi-romantic comedy. Wallace and Chantry meet and fall in love. Chantry has a boyfriend, so Wallace is stuck in shitty friend-zone. Chantry has to figure out if she wants to stay with her boyfriend or go with Wallace. Wallace has to figure out a way to show Chantry how he feels about her, without possibly ruining their friendship forever.
Romantic Comedies aren’t usually my thing. The reason I read this script was because I knew it was a comedy, and it was called The F-Word. I love the F-Word. I think it’s one of the best words. Little did I know, this F-word was FRIEND. I will not review the entire script, because why would you read it if I told you what happens? Instead I will list what I liked and did not like about it.
- First off you will notice that the script is written well and reads easy. You can really visualize what is taking place. The characters are dynamic and actually take on personalities of their own…which is what they’re supposed to do.
- Some parts of this script are actually funny! I found myself literally laughing out loud while reading!
- You really feel for the characters, each in their own personal predicament. Half way through the script I actually found myself wanting to know what happens at the end. The story and characters drove me forward.
- The first thing I really didn’t like about this script were these weird animated “dream” sequences that happen. For some reason it really took me out of the story. I actually found myself subconsciously speed reading through these parts.
- There is one scene in the script were Wallace is really determined to do something. A bunch of bad things start happening to him all at once. Mustard is shot on his shirt — he keeps going — a rain cloud forms above his head and rains on him – he keeps going….etc. It’s really dumb. This whole movie has well written witty comedic dialogue, so why screw it up with really cheesy comedy? I don’t know. It doesn’t work for me.
It’s a script worth reading. I would suggest it to anyone who likes comedy (Who doesn’t?). The characters are great, the story’s compelling, and it’s funny.